Charlie II

Hey BaByLa1989! This looks like a reading comprehension and the literary forums are only for original works. If this is homework then you should really do it yourself. If you ...

You've got it! Yes the rhythm works a lot better now. :) Also check out the number of syllables per line in each stanza. Most of the time you use ...

Not so much in the promotion, man. You can use the blog section however you like! Really it's about finding the power and meaning of the subject and showcasing that, ...

*fixed links*

1) I think you've certainly been careful and sensitive with your description, but that doesn't really change the content you're trying to express. So, in my opinion at least, I'm ...

Thank you, all three of you, for your honest (and speedy :D ) critiques. I agree with you, the prologue is pretty much my twisted version of the beginning to ...

Maybe I didn't make myself clear. I think that the idea of Sam finding out how Alicia feels about Griffin is a great idea, and I thought it was good ...

Thanks, Dreamer and Mabel! I'll give you both return critiques some time. If you PM me the piece you'd like me to review, I'll try and get it done when ...

Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. I think we've talked about the level that this is at so, without further ado, here's my critique. I did spend two school-days on it, so that ...

Edited to give credit to my awesome co-writer 'VampireBadger'! ... it did say in the topic description! Charlie

[spoiler]To be honest, I think she just got addicted to killing off characters! Most of it was needless violence but I do reckon a certain amount was needed to give ...

Hidden [s]messages[/s] spoilers are awesome! [spoiler]Awesome new tags! Such a shame about a certain free house-elf *sniffs*[/spoiler] DarkLight

What happened to the story??????????????? Well: *story removed for overhaul* That. DarkLight

Follow up on the follow up :? ? Art and I had gotten ourselves pregnant [...] *Blushes* Ok, 'ourselves' it is then. When Art graduated, I started going part-time for ...

Ok, the repeated stops are put in for effect but they don't really work. There are far better ways of writing a short pause and just putting three full stops ...